Getting My Hands
Dirty
3:30 A.M.
I
eyed this place
on my way to dinner.
People
come in from all over,
do their business,
and
leave. I can’t blame them;
I’m just like 'em:
stand
mixers kind of
turn me on too.
This
first time, though,
it was your blender that got me,
chopping
bits of chocolate
better than anyone I’d ever known.
I
took the pieces and
melted them in a bowl over boiling
water.
The
aroma was strong,
almost overpowering,
but
I would long for it for weeks.
Seven hours there
and
I was like the crumbs,
fused to the baking pans.
12:15 A.M.
I
went again,
right after clocking out from classes.
It
was too early.
As I hand-grated
three
cups of carrots,
people would barge in.
Can’t they see
we’re busy here?
Why can’t they
microwave their food somewhere else?
I brushed them away
like the flies that prey on our
children.
But
later, I shared our carrot cake babies
with them, and I think they were
more
than glad to have given us
some alone time.
8:20 A.M.
It’s
never a walk of shame
when I visit or leave you.
And
no, I don’t care about all the other people
you’ve been with.
I’ll
bring you gifts every time I see you.
Let me pack your frosty racks with them.
People think I’m cheating on someone with you,
but no one beeps at me like you do.
I
just tell them you’re the best equipped—
but you know I love you for you.
After
all, together we make
the most delicious gingersnaps.
Talk about being gayyyy... bahaha.
This poem is about Will Rice's kitchen. Which is hands-down the BEST college kitchen at Rice. Like seriously. Go check it out. She has everything.
Thoughts?
"I don't write love poems to girls. I write them to kitchens."
ReplyDeleteHAHAAAA best line everrr.
I know you're half-expecting something from me on this, and I usually do! Because poetry is really pretty and little stanzas of emotion.
ReplyDeleteBut I don't know what to say about this.
....
I really don't.
Ah...
A couple of little things though:
- I think you got your time wrong? Is one of them supposed to be PM? 12:15 PM?
I have no words.
Speechless...
oh, Karen, is this that bad...? =\ But it's ok; i turned it in already and it's all over, so no more feedback is needed. xD
ReplyDeleteooh, i changed those lines from clocking out after work (since people got confused) to clocking out after classes, and I realize that now those lines don't make much sense. Since who has class that late? (erm, Bioc 310 is a class, right?) But I just wanted to keep to the times of true-to-life times when I went to WRC kitchen and went to go bake there.
ahaha no it's not bad at all. I just can't critique it because it doesn't leave me with much feeling. Not to say it evokes nothing! But.... i just read it and I'm left a little confused emotionally. Lol. As in, not sure what emotion you want the person reading it to be left with tasting.
ReplyDelete.... yeah...
lol :)